Need help with the Re-work

The initial paper i wrote was not correct for deliverable 2. I was wondering if you could help me rewrite this, so it better fits the requirements.

I have attached both the instructions and the paper i wrote (with the teachers comments) for deliverable 2.

Also was wondering if you could help me with clean up deliverable 4. I have attached the teachers comments. Overall the paper was really great just missing a couple things.

I really appriciate your help. I think i may have bite off more than i could chew when i took this many credits while still having to work full time

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